8:00 p.m.
(c)
I am studying things, to make what I do good.Or better.Or as good as I can.
Break fourth wall:
How to Get the Readability Score in MS Word (Flesch–Kincaid formula) - YouTube:
I try to dumb down the language. Easy vernacular, free of any techy jargon, super easy to make sense of.
Maybe even, using those parables Jonathan Hirshon loves, instead of ever direct explaining.
The script has a score of 10 or 11, which is because of the descriptions of camera movements, camera shots, bla bla bla.
The actual dialogue, has to be very easy to follow.
Less is better, less is more, less is best.
I try to see what not to do.
What makes it good:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dnoJ_qQqAwg
What makes it good dialogue.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WpK5dXw0WzI
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I am too busy to write. I will write later.
